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Being Careful With Money Can Make A Smart Consumer We, as students, have to contact with sell everyday. We don't have our own income, as a result, we have to br careful with our money. Someone may think that this may not make us smart onsumers, but in fact, this could. First of all, because we need to save our money lest we get into fianacial troubles, we have a clear awareness of what we need and make decision of what we are giong to buy. Therefore, we may be smarter as years do by and be smarter enough. Then,
