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字数：300 满分：100分
有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足。
with the development of society and technology,more and more people regard the importance of money as their blood which is necessary to their body.actually,it is part of true and fault.as far as i am concerned,especially to our students,we do not put money into the first position.we should save money because it is earned uneasily by our parents. First,we should collect all kinds of coupons and look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel .it not only can save money and to do other significant things but also help us build a true concept of treat money,especially contain effectively money worship in order to have a bad effect on our students.second,we should share responsibility for our parents.they work laboriously to us,we should not waste money like buying clothes as freedom. filial piety is a previous morality,how often we heard the word like this.so,we should do some thing to respect and care our parents. In a word,whatever the society and technology develop rapidly,we can't forget the basic morality that is save money.at the same time,it is high time to us to share responsibility for our parents.
