2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇，不过拼写错误比较多；连词使用偏少。

nowdays ,education pays is being an important part in family pays. and ,is it get gains ?the anwer is "yes ".a survey from Bureau of Labor Statistics in American shows the kind of people who has more higer education degree gets more earning than the one who has lower dgree .And higer dgree people is more easy to find a job . coins have two sides . If this social situatiom being more serious , some people who have no high degree educatiom will face a difficult living challenge .As a result ,the criming rate will be improve. I think ,the govermen should change the education struction to control working supermarking and ,help people get more average earnings .