高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；从句偏少，建议平时练习中加大单词的记忆；衔接成分偏少；连词使用偏少。

MY hometown My hometown is not far away from here,If I were free,I usually go back to my hometown to rest. In the past,hometown is surrounded by green trees,fishes were having fun in the clear river.But,people don't live the beautiful house,the house were humble,the streets were narrow,people don't live the rich life. Now,everything has changed.High-rise buildings , factory store stand anywhere.The streets are very busy,many car runs on it.But industrial development environment deterioration,Trees reduce and the fish disappeared.Pollution becomes very important problem.