2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(17)写作:上网优缺点

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和长句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

Today many students are interested in going online. But it has advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are: getting a lot of information quickly, a useful learning tool and making friends. The disadvantages are: playing games and chatting can waste time and money, it isn’t good for our study. You can be cheated when you go online. I think going online is good for me. I plan to go online for an hour every day. If you make a plan, you can find it is very useful. We use it to open to expand the field of vision, the study knowledge, but must certainly grasp the discretion.