2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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As we all know ,nothing is impossible ,so long as we never yield up. flood come into my mind ,there was a time when i studied in high school where everything must be forced on studying and nothing else you can do except studying. for a while,I really thought I was in the hell because I suffered a lot of pain in studying math .It's too difficult to do anthing about it.so i was desperate.But thanks to my mom that she told me a lot of meanings. "strong mind is a bridge to the success."and you should learned how to make yourself stronger then before. only make yourself be a strong mind person can you finish the giant work. as well as studying,you should make all-out efforts to studying.So you can make it.