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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4504
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分86.0分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;熟练使用了一些长难句;文中词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,学术词汇积累也做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

As the vast majority of information is spreaded though the Internet,it is widely agreed that the Internet plays a more and more important role of everyday life and eventurally changes the way of interpersonal communication. The main reason people use the Internet is to communicate with other people over e-mail——and the principal reason why people send e-mail messages to others is to maintain interpersonal relationships.Particularly in modern times the Internet technology has now penetrated the entire planet to a similar extent.Thus,people with easy access to others would feel better connected and more strongly supported by others, leading to happiness and engagement in families, organizations, communities, and society more generally. Apart from the advantage of the Internet in maintaining interpersonal relationships,it is also necessary to bear in mind,in order to have good and proper quality of interpersonal communication and sociability,that electronic communication may lead to weaker social ties. It follows from what has been said that the Internet communication is an impoverished and sterile form of social exchange compared to traditional face-to-face interactions.The result is that,the Internet use will lead to negative outcomes for individual users,such as increases in despression and loneliness,and neglecting of existing close relationships. For my part,I think that the Internet is but latest a series of technology advances that have changed the world communication in a fundamental way.A glance at the sections of time for surfing in the Internet you listed in schedule is a clear demonstration of the fact that, social interaction over the Internet is preferred and leads to better outcomes than in traditional interaction venues, as well as those in which it doesn’t. As the Internet becomes ever more a part of our daily lives, the trick for us will be to know the difference. Nevertheless it is reassuring that the evidence thus far shows people to be adapting pretty well to the brave new wired (and soon to be wireless) social world.

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