作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Playing football is my favorite. I fell in love with it by chance. One day, I found a football on my way home. I was so curious about the little round ball that I began to play it with my friends. From then on, football became part of my life.with my classmates after class. We often train ourselves, and sometimes we compete in football games in order to improve our skills. Among all the football stars, I admire Beckham most. It is not his handsome appearance but his skills that impress me a lot.My greatest dream is to become a professional football player in the future.