2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(105):改变教育方式

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Dear Uncle, How are you these days? I’m writing to tell you my trouble with my parents. In my opinion, my parents are too strict with me. They expect too much of me but I really can’t live up to their expectations. Besides, they often compare me with my neighbor who is considered better, which makes me rather depressed. And they even don’t allow me to watch TV or surf the Internet because they think it’s a waste of time. What’s more, I can’t make friends with girls because it may influence my study. In one word, I feel that there is a wide generation gap between us, and therefore we can’t communicate with each other freely, much less exchange views. Till now I haven’t found a good solution to these problems. I would be grateful if you could do me a favor to talk to my parents and persuade them to change the way of education. I’m looking forward to your revert. Best wishes, Yours, Li Yi.