希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是学术词汇的积累;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear Classmates, I think it is very necessary for us to talk about friendship at the meeting today. Friendshop is very important for every one.Some students think friendship is break the school rule such as bullying other students,smoking,drinking,covering up student's mistakes.If you think so,you are wrong! Loving the collective,helping with each other and making progress is the correct friendship. If you have the correct friendship,you will be happiness!