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词数100-120,文章的开头已给出(不计词数)。
It is spring文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
It is spring, the good time to enjoy the beautiful nature. Our school is planning to organize a spring outing for the students. As a Senior Three student. I don't think it good to go for an outing. As is known to us all, we are occupied with our studies every day.We seldom have extra time to do other things.Having a spring outing is a waste of time and money. In addition,we can hardly concentrate on our studies immediately after the outing,which may lead to a bad effect. What's more,the outside world is full of unexpected things,which may result in some terrible accidents. So as for me, it's better to stay at school and concentrate ourselves on our studies.Time for us is the most important things,now!