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Playing football is my favorite. I fell in love with by chance. One day. I found a football on may way home.I was so cuirous about the little round ball that I began to play it with ma friends. From then on. Football became part of my life. I often play football with my classmates after class. We often train ourselves, and sometimes we compete in football games in order to improve our skills