拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
China is now more and more involved in international events, so it is necessary for us to improve the qualities of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication. Sometimes some people don't behave properly in our daily lives. For example, spitting in public places can be seen somewhere. The flowers in public gardens are picked. What is worse, rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the street