文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Dear editor I have had a problem recently and I don't know what to do between what I want and what my parents want. I am an average student in my school. So my parents feel that I should spend more time improving my grades In this way, 1 can go to a good university in the future. However, I have been playing for the school basketball team for the past few years. My coach thinks I have a chance to become a real future star. As you recognize, it always takes me a lot of time to practice and take part in games. They are angry with me and don't allow me to do it again. As for me, I like basketball and 1 hope I will be well trained arid become a super star. Look forward to getting your advice soon. Yours, Li Hong.