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Dear Mike, I'm glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend the MidAutumn Day here. The MidAutumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is celebrated only by Chinese people. It falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year, when people of a family get together and enjoy the dinner together. After that they eat mooncakes, which stands for the spirit of the festival-unity. Often, if the weather permits, they will go out of the house to enjoy the bright moonlight, talking about something