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Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our city. I’d like to tell you something about our city. Nanjing, the capital of Jiangsu Province, lies in the southeast of China. It has a population of about 5 million. The city has a history of more than 2,400 years, nd was once the capitals of ten dynasties. It is a very beautiful city with a lot of places of interest, such as theXuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City. It also has many modern factories and high buildings.
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