英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 初中> 初三英语> 真题> 江苏省张家港市2011届九年级上学期期末试卷写作:亲情问题演讲稿

江苏省张家港市2011届九年级上学期期末试卷写作:亲情问题演讲稿

发布时间:2013-06-25 18:52浏览次数:1971
要求:

假设你正在参加江苏省中学生英语演讲比赛,请针对有些父母亲经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象,写一篇演讲稿,陈述你的观点。


演讲稿的主要内容应包括:

认为同学们不必为此烦恼,,希望能够体谅父母的苦衷。

建议以谈话、写信等方式与父母交流和沟通。


注意:
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。


Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.
Some of us are having problems with our parents,as they often look into our school bags
or read our diaries.____________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
用户的作文(系统评分40.5分
评语:

拼写错误过多

用户练习作文:

Some of us are havingproblems with our parents,as they often look into ourschool bags or read ourdiaries. I fully understandwhy we are not comfortableabout it, but there's no needto feel too sad. Our parentsare checking our bags ordiaries to make sure we'renot getting into any trouble.They have probably heardsome horrible stories aboutother kids and thought wemight do the same. Orperhaps they just want toconnect with us but aredoing it all wrong. Mysuggestion is: Tell them wewant them to trust us asmuch as we'd like to trustthem. If you don't think youcan talk to them, write thema letter and leave it lyingaround-they are bound toread it.  Thank you

会员评论0个评论)
826554191
金币:16

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:78.51435317957

人气:62发布:2013-08-28

得分:78.0eamonchueng

人气:46发布:2016-03-31

得分:76.0范小琳

人气:50发布:2013-07-07

得分:74.519883529

人气:46发布:2014-07-29

得分:69.5Tesh

人气:45发布:2014-05-16