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Dear George: You tell me you will spend your summer holidays in China,so I ask about household hotel about the cost。If you live here, you want single room you will cost 30yuan a day.And the double room will cost 20 yuan a day.You can have lunch with the master or cook by yourself。And you will spend 20yuan with your everyday the meal money。 When you live here can swimming in the sea、 Bathing in the sea and mountain-climbing。You can do work in warm room of your own accord but without money. If you live in the household hotel, you can konw about chinese Family atmosphere，and you also can know about many things about China. I hope you can come on early! Yours, Li Hua.
