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2001年1月英语四级作文真题:如何面试成功

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:40浏览次数:1165
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 面试在求职过程中的作用
2. 取得面试成功的因素
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;请注意分段。

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  Students must look for jobs by themselves. Job interview is the first start to the success of their work. It is need that succeeding in a job interview is very important.   There are some ways to solve your success in a job interview. First, you should write all the information about you, such as your records and your awards, if there is any, and the last but not the least, a carefully designed resume, in both Chinese and English.Second, you must pay much attention to your appearance, including your dress and your behavior. While talking with the interviewer, you should listen to him , accompanied with proper eye contact and a timely nod of head.Third, you must be confident about yourself. Your smiling face is the best way to show your confidence and friendliness. You should be also honest, especially when talking about yourself.      

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