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Students must look for jobs by themselves. Job interview is the first start to the success of their work. It is need that succeeding in a job interview is very important. There are some ways to solve your success in a job interview. First, you should write all the information about you, such as your records and your awards, if there is any, and the last but not the least, a carefully designed resume, in both Chinese and English.Second, you must pay much attention to your appearance, including your dress and your behavior. While talking with the interviewer, you should listen to him , accompanied with proper eye contact and a timely nod of head.Third, you must be confident about yourself. Your smiling face is the best way to show your confidence and friendliness. You should be also honest, especially when talking about yourself.