高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

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Dear editor， With people's level of living to improve，so more and more people have car.There are the many suggestion.There have people think they will very Convenient when they go out if they have car.Many peopel have the car Show the improvement of people's living conditions and homeland become rich.If mach people buy car can Drive the development of other industries. There are some peopel are against this view.They think car will make the air Pollution,if many cars in street will case transportation accident.And many car without garage to stop.