作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Now, According to a survey,almost all the schools and colleges are rebuilding their campus:.not only the teaching buildings In this essay,I will discuss the importance of campus construction . A lot of efforts have been made to better the campus environment,in particular,the construction of a green campus.such as artificial pools,and tree-lined roads. However,in my view,this is only the initial step and we can do more. To begin with,the schools and colleges may implement strict regulation of waste on campus. no matter the leftovers in canteens or the litter in classrooms. Moreover,on the student side,we can use green bags instead of disposable plastic bags and use more recycling chopsticks and bowls.