高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨；请注意分段。

Dear editor Civility is the measure of a country's national quality standard. Therefore, my classmates and I discussed this topic of civilization. First of all, we are civilized people, mode of discourse and behavior we are reflected in many of our education. So, is important to improve the personal quality of civilization! In addition, more recent events are not civilization, I several times saw the uncivilized people spitting, littering. I hate this kind of behavior, so I decided to do a civilized people!