高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown used to be a beautiful place. Green willows around our town, a gust of wind blowing, the river fish four walk, Crystal River more comfortable. Building simple narrow streets, people's daily farming, life is very happy. With the accelerated process of industrialization, our town into a modern metropolis, but, once beautiful town into a pollution of the city, many-storied buildings factory shop Lin, the size of the vehicle ride the streets, everywhere filled with exhaust gas. The trees a day to reduce, the river is polluted, fish in groups to die, the environment pollution is thoroughly. Now, only to save the environment, we can continue to live a healthy life!