高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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I’d like to tell you something about our city. Nanjing, the capital of Jiangsu Province, lies in the southeast of China. It has a population of about 5 million. The city has a history of more than 2,400 years, and was once the capitals of ten dynasties. It is a very beautiful city with a lot of places of interest, such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City. It also has many modern factories and high buildings. Great changes have taken place in Nanjing in recent years. People here are living a comfortable and happy life. It will be better tomorrow. I’m sure you will have a good time here.