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I am glad to be here for introducing my friend Tony.He is 16, and he is a student too!He is good at football and like journey.When I first met him,we were touring on the Great Wall last year. Now he come to our country again and plan to make more friends ,and at the same time to visit Tai Mountain.Now let's warmly welcome Tony.
