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I am glad to be here for introducing my friend Tony.He is 16and he is a student too!He is good at football and like journey.When I first met him,we were touring on the Great Wall last year. Now he came to our country again and hopes to make more friends ,and at the same time wants to visit Tai Mountain.Now let's warmly welcome Tony.
