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Today I am going to introduce to you a novel. This is a brief introduction to the story. Hope you will enjoy reading this representative work of Mark Twain. Today, I am going to introduce to you a novel. This novel is called “The Million Pound Banknote” written by Mark Twain. Through humorous and sarcastic language, Mark Twain successfully depicted a fortuitous adventure of Henry Adams, a poor American lad in London. Two rich men in London had a bet on him and wanted to see what would become of him a month later if they gave him a million pound banknote which couldn‟t be cashed. A month later, Henry wasn‟t starved nor arrested, but became a millionaire. What‟s more, he even won the love of a pretty lady. This is a brief introduction to the story. Hope you will enjoy reading this representative work of Mark Twain.