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2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

发布时间:2013-06-08 00:13浏览次数:2233
要求:
Government money should support more important things rather than artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
写作思路
第一段:引入话题,艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段:科学研究与社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平,如科技,教育,医疗。但是这些只能满足人们的物质需求。
第三段:政府需要投资艺术,因为:
1. 人类有多重的需求,艺术是表达感情和思想的渠道,原始社会就有艺术形式的存在。艺术不活跃,导致思想僵化,科技和经济发展迟滞。高度文明的社会总是伴随着繁荣的文化和艺术
2. 艺术和文化有地域特点,是国家团结的一个纽带
3. 艺术提供看世界的多重视角,培养人的创造和创新能力
第四段:政府应该既投资社会基础服务,也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会.
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句采用很棒;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒。

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At present day, a lot of projects or infrastructures in vary fields are supported by the fiscal, for instance, education programs, social welfare construction, service industry development science research etc. Some parts of people suggest that government should invest more in any other important zones than artists, and look down upon the function of the art. From my perspective, I prefer to push the art forward rather than despise its significance. Even though science and industry are capable of improving the standard of living via satisfying the needs of substances by developing the economy, art is still indispensable. For one thing, human being have variety of demands, spirt pursuit is the important component of the requirements, we could obtain the satisfaction in the spirt through the art, a channel to express our views and emotion, emerged in the primitive society. inactive art will turn the thoughts into rigid condition, inept the science and the economy, highly civilized society was always progressing with the booming culture and art. Secondly, different cultures and arts settled in disparate regions show us various forms of creations and enlightenments as a bond of unity for a country. various of arts gather minorities together so that enhance the cohesion of the people. At last, the art offers dimensional angles for us to scan the whole world, it is able to cultivate the creative ability. In the conclusion, government should maintain the input in the social fundamental services, in the meanwhile, balance the arts' development in order to construct a heathy and organic society.

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