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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(123):塑料袋

发布时间:2014-01-22 15:42浏览次数:486
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据报道,目前我国居民每日使用塑料袋约30亿个,中国已成为白色污染大国。自今年6月1日起,全国的商品零售场所将不再免费提供塑料购物袋。请根据左侧的漫画,结合生活实际,用英语写一篇120―150词的短文,谈谈你对“限塑令”的看法。

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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

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It is reported that around three hundred million plastic bags are used by Chinese residents each day. As is known in the picture, the earth is crying for help because of this serious white pollution. To our joy, all the shopping places will be banned from providing free plastic bags from June 1 this year. I can’t agree more to this. For a long time, though we have known the bad effects of plastic bags on our environment, still we find it difficult to refuse them --- they are so convenient to us. Thanks to the government, firm measures are to be taken to limit them. I am sure people will become accustomed to giving up the plastic bags. Only by changing the way we treat the earth can we form a harmonious relationship with it. Saving the earth is saving ourselves. Stop using plastic bags.

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