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SaturdayDecember 30, 2002Sunny John Denver, a famous American country music singer, is giving his singing performances at the People's Theatre this week. I was lucky to get a ticket and heard him sing this evening. Denver is one of the most famous country music singers in America. He has made many records, and has traveled to many countries in the world. His songs are often broadcast on the radio or TV. He sang wonderfully this evening. His songs were very beautiful. Although I couldn't understand some of the words in his songs, I could still feel from his songs the beauties of the country. I hope I can listen to him again.