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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dear Manager: I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema. First, the film was delayed as there were so many advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoying. Second, the sound of the film was so loud that I could hardly hear it. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terrible should happen, it would be difficult for people to get out quickly. As a visitor to your city, I am disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make more improvements. Yours faithfully Li Huas
