c)你的建议。
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As everyone knows,people can get much information through the internet.But it has both positive and negative points. On the one hand,surfing the internet is very easy and it is becoming more and more popular among us teenagers.They are so interesting and enjoyable that students all love playing them.It's true that it can not only do good for the students but also be of great interest,make them happy and relaxed as well. On the other hand,surfing the Internet has some disadvantages.Some students are so addicted to the online games that they can't get rid of them,which would waste time and do harm to their study.What's more,there are some bad materials in the games or on the Internet,which would have a terrible influence on their health. I think that Internet is a good tool to get to know the world,but we should use it in a right way.