托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

Along with the increase usage of internet, the spread speed of news become more and more fast. It is good for people to know the world, in many aspect. But on the other hand, many news which are not based on truth are accepted by some people. Usually, these snap judgments can not be trusted. What is snap judgments? Literally, it is the judgment that is not be considered very carefully. And then it is be spread to others which is very harmful. Because if the person who takes this news as truth makes a wrong decision, it is probably followed by a bad result. For instance, my uncle was crazy about making money from buying stocks last year. And by chance, his friend told him there was a stock would raise at next few days. So he spent a lot of money to buy that stock. You could image the result is my uncle lost so lots of money just as he believed such kind of snap news. Also, even though the judgments are right, we can not trust them before doing some research. Nobody will deal with problems to you if you make yourself into trouble just because you easily trust what you hear. So please make judgment by yourself, don not just sit and hear, do something. In short, I believe we should not trust snap judgments not only because most of times snap judgments are biased and wrong, but also because judgment which is made by ourselves is more reliable and fit for us.