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The pie chart contains information about the different sporting activities participated in by male students at Hamilton University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
能较灵活地使用学术词汇，希望能改善用词单一的情况；文中应增加从句和复合句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。
The pie charts show a wide range of sports that male students in Hamilton University are involved in. According to the charts, it is apparent that the combination of soccer and basketball occupies more than 50% of the totality. As the main sports in Hamilton University, soccer and basketball dwarf the rest of the sports activities. Tennis is the third popular sports activity among all these, which is about a little more than the every one of the rest three activities. In contrast, the discrepancy between volleyball and swimming is none compared that between Volleyball and soccer. Nevertheless, even as the fifth popular sports in the university, male students involved in swimming are also 7.5% higher than those in athletics. In a nutshell, all but athletics attract more than 10% of the male students. Among all these activities, male students who participate in soccer, basketball, tennis take up almost three quarters of the total percentile.
