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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第39篇:玩游戏是否能教你生活

发布时间:2013-08-16 16:51浏览次数:1396
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Playing games teaches us about life.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


玩游戏是否能教你生活。给出具体的原因并举例。

字数要求:300字以内。

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Some persons think playing games teaches us about life. But other one think playing games can eliminate people`s courage and morale. I think the proverb is right that nothing is impossible. So I prefer the first saying. The results as following: First, playing games can test the ability of people solve problem. We all know the game is generally divided into single player and multi-player modes. The single player mode is a testament to the ability to solve problem independently. Make a plan, use the shortest time find out the shortest way, as far as possible avoid all enemies. Or to go into next scene after find out a key or any clues to solve puzzles. These can need very well individual competence. Second, playing games can train sense of teamwork and good communication ability. In a game group, everyone have a role, the role has abilities to kill enemies or supply enery or rise to hurt. All people need to coordinate the leader`s order, and excharge our status to the leader, the leader timely adjustments the arrange in requires. Like this, to defeat the enemies. But, playing games may teaches us many abilities and may let us fall into virtual world. We need to adjust our times, do not let game disturb our live. If you understand it and apply it to your study and or work. You will benefit a lot from it.

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