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It’s so hard for me to make a decision. I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions.
Please write back soon.单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；运用了一些简单从句，但不是很熟练；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Summer holidays after.I can go to senior middle school and to learn. Because of living at school.I want to chat with you.If I live at school I don't often go home and look after my parents.And the food is very trouble. Possible have some insects.If I live at home I possible convenient at traffic.But the food is very delicious. dear Bill should I change?
