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How to improve the school safety School safety is a matter of great importance. Greaat efforts should be made by the school to make sure the campus is safe. Firstly, nobody should be allowed to enter the school without permission. The school guard should check everyone entering the school strictly. Besides, the school security guards should walk around the campus