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山东临沂市临沭县2012-2013学年高二下学期模拟试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:10浏览次数:2594
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假如你是李华,因不能赴约去你朋友John 家共进晚餐,因为你将忙于准备后天的一门重要考试,据此用英语写一封致歉信。要点包括:
1、感谢对方邀请
2、遗憾地告诉对方你无法赴约并说明理由
3、祝对方度过一个愉快的时光,并另约时间联系。
注意:字数:100左右。可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文章层次较为清晰;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮;请注意分段。

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Dear John, Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening.Going online has become more and more popular because of its convenience.In many people's view,knowing how to go online is a kind of skill and the quick and large amount of information will help people a lot in nearly all areas.But nothing is perfect.Spending too much time on line will be harmful for people's health and makes people do less exercise and have less time to talk with others face to face.What's more,depending on the computer too much,people's creativity will be lacked because they always get thoughts from others. In my opinion,indeed ,going online helps us a lot and sometimes we have to depend on it but time shouldn't be too long and we must control ourselves when we realize we spend a long time on it.If we can do this,going online is a great way to develop the world. I wish you have a good time.

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