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258 North ChangWu Road Changzhou, Jiangsu, PRC Aug. 10,2006 Dear James, Nice to hear from you again. This summer vacation, at the end of July, we winners of NEPC went to a four-day English summer camp in Changzhou. Some English teachers from China, the USA, England and Australia joined us. In the camp, we had an English speech competition, watched wonderful performances given by the students and visited some places of interest in Changzhou. Besides, we exchanged our English learning experience, and talked about or colorful school life in English. In this way, we not only have made many new friends. We really had great fun in the camp. I hope you can have such a chance to join us next year. Yours, Li Hua
