初中英语命题作文真题演练(72):来中国旅游

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Hello, everyone ! Let me introduce my friend Tony to you. Tony a 22-year-old boy who comes from England. He is studying in a university. He is fond of sports very much. He can play football well and he also likes traveling. Last winter, when I was visiting the Great Wall, I met him. Since then, we write to each other frequently. We are good friends now. Last week, he came to China again and He hopes to meet more Chinese friends. So I introduce him to all of you. I hope we can get on well with each other. And Tony is planning to climb Mountain Tai this summer. I hope he will have a good time in China. That’s all. Thank you.