2013全国中考英语试题汇编试题(19)写作:敬老院的公益活动

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Each student please pay attention. There's a meaningful nead us to do that is paying a visit to the old people’s home this Sunday. We’ll have to meet at the school gate at 8:30 on Sunday morning and then go there by bus. we will do some cleaning and tidy the rooms there. After that we will have many activities, such as singing, dancing, telling stories and chatting to cheer up the old. Before we leave, we’ll give our presents to them. I hope all of us can take an active part. Through the meaningful activity, we can learn to care for the old.