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Today,I'm going to introuduce a great novel named The Million Pound Banknote.This book was written by Mark Twain who was the famous writer aroud the world. The book told us a story about Henry's fortuitous adventure in London.Two rich men give henry 1000000 check.But the check can't use.They wanted to laugh at henry.In fact,he didn't die and get into trouble.And he married a beatiful.
