高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

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Dear Mike, welcome to my homeland.I hope that your parents and you will have as good holiday at China.Let me introuduce our culture As we all know the Mid-autumn Festival is one of the most important festivals in China, which really has a long history. Nowadays the festival is more famous because we can have a three day break in the festival .We usually get together and have a big dinner .Mooncakes are the mark of the festival in China and in the western it is the turkey ,and meanwhile in this day seeing the moon is a habit because it is more bright.