2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(122):成人仪式

文中词汇表达较灵活丰富，不过请检查文章的单词拼写；运用了一些简单从句，但不是很熟练；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

Hi, Tom! How are you? Yestoday, my school held the Growing-up Ceremony for us. Isn't it cool? We told the world what we would do after we being grow-ups. Then we thanked our teachers and parents for their caring and teaching. After that, we gave the beautiful cards what we prapred before to those warm-hearted teacher. The teachers seemed happy emply. Finally, it was time to show us. Everyone devoted themselves to playing their role. It was no doute that wether students or teachers all had a special time. You cannot imagine how fun we had. I will never forget the date that I become a grow-up. And you? How was your Growing-up Ceremony? Write me soon.