高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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Hello every one!Welcome to Nanjing.Let me introduce the beautiful and great city. Nanjing is in the southeast of China.It belongs to Jingshu province.The city is a substantial city.There are about 500 million people.And Nanjing has long history.There used to be 10 dynasty.And Nanjing is also a very beatiful city.There are many scenic spot.Such as Xuanwu lank,Jiming temple,Stone City and more.Somes are feer,others are charges.The old city not only have old building but also have many Modern factories and tall buildings. The 2014 Youth Olympic Games will host by Nanjing.It can be A section unforgettable memory.