2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(120):交流学生

可适当增加从句使用，注意极个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

Dear Jia Qi, Very glad to have received your letter. Now I'll tell you about students' taking the part-time jobs in Britain. The English students who are over 15 years old are alowed to take the part-time jobs during their free time. They can work 3 hours a day or 18 hours a week, and they are not allowed to work after seven o'clock in the evening. How wonderful it is! In my opinin, let the high school students take part-time jobs is a good idea. First of all, there is no doute that students can get many skills, such as fill applications, show themselves in the interviews, how to get along well with others and so on. Secondly, it is a good chance to improve students' confidence and independnce. They can learn how to deal with their money. Above all, it is good for improving their study and growing.