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To help students learn more about computers, we have invited Professor Wang Ping from the Computer Department of Zhongshan University to give us a lecture on Saturday, the third of March. Professor Wang will talk about the use of computer and how to learn through the internet. The lecture begins at 2:00 pm on the third floor of the Library. Building. Please bring your questions in computer learning, which will be answered by Professor Wang after the lecture. Any computer-lover is welcome to attend the lecture and required to arrive on time... The Students’ Union Feb.28th
