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Dear LEE: I am glad to your nice and great school next week when I got the letter.But I think I countn't go to your school.Becausa my mother was illness.I must take after her.Because it was very serious.I am very sorry.I hope I can go to you school and have a class at you school one day.And if next week you have to have a class,you could find professor Zhang. Yours Mike