2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

As we all know,excessive packaging of goods become a usual trend,such as mooncake box.Goods packaged more beautifully with the same quality. As far as i am concerned,excessive packaging of goods become popular because people like beautiful things. You may think that the mooncake have a quality problem because of bad packaging.On the other hand,businesses consider that more beautiful the goods look,more people it can attract to buy it so that they can earn more money. From my point,everyone should think more highly of the quality than the packaging,In addition,business should produce goods with good quality and normal packaging in order to protect our environment.Only in this way,can we have a more healthy life