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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(115):圣诞假期

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要求:
下面是Linda给Lois的信,请你以Lois的口气, 按照提示写一封120词左右的回信。
Dear Lois,
How is everything with you? I hope things are going well.
There is not much news here. I just go to work every morning and come home to my apartment every night. New York is full of people, but I don’t really know any of them. I don’t
like the city, but my job is quite interesting, and the pay is quite good.
What are your plans for the Christmas holiday? If you don’t have any plan, I hope you can visit New York. Come and share my apartment. It is quite large, and it is quite near the theatres, museums and stores.
Write soon, and say you can spend the holidays here.
Sincerely,
Linda
提示:回信应包括以下内容
1.Lois没有及时回信,解释其原因;   2.Linda喜欢她的工作,但不喜欢纽约,Lois谈看法; 
3.Lois建议Linda该怎么过圣诞假期; 4.Lois谢绝Linda的邀请,并解释其原因;    
5.Lois也同时发出邀请。
Dear Linda,
How are you getting along? I hope things are going well with you too.
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Please give my best regards to your parents.
    Yours,
     Lois
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作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,学术词汇使用过少;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Dear Linda,How are you getting along? I hope things are going well with you too. I'm very sorry did not reply in a timely manner. Because these days I went to grandma's house and did not see your letter. You say you love your job but didn't love New York. That is you do not adapt to life in New York. In fact, New York is a prosperous city is a beautiful city. I suggest that you go to spend your Christmas Times Square, which you have many people to spend Christmas with you. I'm sorry I can't be with you for Christmas. Because I'm going to live in Losangeles's grandmother home and family.

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