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Dear Linda,How are you getting along? I hope things are going well with you too. I'm very sorry did not reply in a timely manner. Because these days I went to grandma's house and did not see your letter. You say you love your job but didn't love New York. That is you do not adapt to life in New York. In fact, New York is a prosperous city is a beautiful city. I suggest that you go to spend your Christmas Times Square, which you have many people to spend Christmas with you. I'm sorry I can't be with you for Christmas. Because I'm going to live in Losangeles's grandmother home and family.